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wdf?

This is Newgrounds, Not Newgroundos.

finish it

finish it and it'll kick ass

nice

well i liked it, although it was short you really have some artistic talent. i fived it (probably cuz i've been watching turd all day) but i look forward even more to your future projects. you've really got some potential.

not bad

yea it was a good idea, but it wasn't all that smooth and it was kind of a dumb ending. It definetly has potential tho, work harder next time

lol

It definetly had potential, but it was short and didn't have much of a storyline. Next time, maybe tell us why he was angry. Also, there is no point in telling us that the fly's name was Fernando, cuz they didn't even talk. Still, make longer and more detailed flashes and I'm sure you'll do great.

Darkar responds:

Thanks a lot I just wanted to practice a little Lip Sync.

Nice

I enjoyed it, it was rather short but it had some real talent behind it. If he hasn't already, tell ur friend to submit that music in the audio portal.

Ok....

Here's some advice, don't foreshadow your submissions like that. If you worked on a flash, you may as well go all out with it rather than give the viewer a bad outlook on the flash before it even starts.

BlakTornado responds:

What do you mean by Foreshadowing? Do you mean not putting music on the beginning because Ive cut that out in my new movies. I dont know what foreshadowing is and ive never heard of it but thanks for the reveiw.. it helped anyway!

not bad

well since it was ur first animation, i'll give you a little more credit....it was a hell of a lot better than my first animation anyway. happy birthday lol

soundboardguy responds:

thank you :)

Ok

well it was short, but i liked it....the artwork was good just work on making it longer

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